poemranker ::The Sunnyside of David Uden by lukehanney

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Free verse № 151722

The Sunnyside of David Uden

Member since 2002 · Posted 30 Apr 2007 · 2 comments

Who knows when it rains or snows, When the weathers fine and washing's on the line. When the beetroot faced postman comes to your door, He's wearing shorts, legs you've never seen before. Down the stairs strolls Dave Uden, frollicking clown Despite the sun he's still in his dressing gown He doesn't know, he doesn't care He's just embarrased about his pink underwear.

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6 votes so far. Yours would make 7.6 votes so far

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[4] Dovina 30-Apr-07/2:49 PM Reply
Please don't vote for yourself, especially with a 10; and do use apostrophes where grammar demands, not just where you want them. I'd give a 7, but 4 instead, to balance your 10.
[4] pete 7-May-07/4:50 PM Reply
clunky