poemranker ::without you by ThePariahDog

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Free verse № 78037

without you

Member since 2003 · Posted 19 Dec 2003 · 1 comment

no work for me today condemned to live my life this way in despair with regrets but i'll remember and never forget the times we shared beneath the sun in our prime full of fun as well as laughter playing games never thinking that it wouldn't be the same without you but now i'm here while you are there life can be so unfair and cruel at times the tears have dried i've said goodbye i just feel as though i'm empty inside without you

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[7] daniella 28-Feb-04/8:00 PM Reply
dont tether yourself to rhyming... let go...