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without you (Free verse) by ThePariahDog
no work
for me today
condemned to live
my life this way
in despair
with regrets
but i'll remember
and never forget
the times we shared
beneath the sun
in our prime
full of fun
as well as laughter
playing games
never thinking that
it wouldn't be the same
without you
but now i'm here
while you are there
life can be
so unfair
and cruel at times
the tears have dried
i've said goodbye
i just feel as though
i'm empty inside
without you
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.3333335
Weighted score: 5.3585887
Overall Rank: 3316
Posted: December 19, 2003 10:05 PM PST; Last modified: December 19, 2003 10:05 PM PST
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