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without you (Free verse) by ThePariahDog
no work for me today condemned to live my life this way in despair with regrets but i'll remember and never forget the times we shared beneath the sun in our prime full of fun as well as laughter playing games never thinking that it wouldn't be the same without you but now i'm here while you are there life can be so unfair and cruel at times the tears have dried i've said goodbye i just feel as though i'm empty inside without you

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.3333335
Weighted score: 5.3585887
Overall Rank: 3326
Posted: December 19, 2003 10:05 PM PST; Last modified: December 19, 2003 10:05 PM PST
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[7] daniella @ 24.232.82.153 | 28-Feb-04/8:00 PM | Reply
dont tether yourself to rhyming... let go...
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