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without you (Free verse) by ThePariahDog

no work for me today condemned to live my life this way in despair with regrets but i'll remember and never forget the times we shared beneath the sun in our prime full of fun as well as laughter playing games never thinking that it wouldn't be the same without you but now i'm here while you are there life can be so unfair and cruel at times the tears have dried i've said goodbye i just feel as though i'm empty inside without you

daniella 28-Feb-04/8:00 PM
dont tether yourself to rhyming... let go...




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