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Holding You (Free verse) by forsaken
The other day I heard a man
Say for something he would do all he can
That it's all he wants in the world
It got me thinking all I want is for you to be my girl
He said he'd give up anything for this
Well he must have been talking about your kiss
Cause if I was a rich man and owned it all
Then I'd trade it for a kiss to feel real tall
To match the growth in my heart since we met
It's been filled to the point of busting I bet
How many more wonderful feelings can I have inside
It's like being a child and going on all the rides
You got my heart racing baby and it feels so good
Far better then I ever imaged it ever could
In fact the only thing I've known to be better
Was when I dreamt I was holding you so I wrote you this letter
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Arithmetic Mean: 7.25
Weighted score: 6.9817934
Overall Rank: 107
Posted: October 14, 2007 11:49 AM PDT; Last modified: October 14, 2007 11:49 AM PDT
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