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My Angel (Free verse) by mytenderrage
Flying above me,
His white wings floating
Among the fluffy clouds
Within the intensity of the sky
Colored by the brightness of the fiery sun.
Beating in the air,
Softly and lightly,
He seemed to float.
He seemed to float among the gentle swirls of white,
His foamy white wings blending within the softness.
He stretches out for me.
He stretches his hand out tenderly.
Reaching for me.
Waiting for me.
I feel the warmth of his hand
As I reach him with my own
He pulls me; he lifts me
Up above into the sky,
Within the softness
Within the gentleness
Of the pure white mists
As they gently caress my face.
He holds me in his embrace,
As my soul intensifies with the joy
I had never felt before.
I felt the arrow of Eros
Embed itself within my heart,
Beating loud and strong,
As the blood of passion surged
Through my heated veins.
"Thank you, Angel,"
I whisper quietly into his ear.
"My Angel."
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Weighted score: 5.522185
Overall Rank: 2632
Posted: July 29, 2002 3:20 PM PDT; Last modified: July 29, 2002 3:20 PM PDT
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