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Two Towers (Free verse) by Tascobar You wait for a plane,
Seemingly never on time.
Then two come along.
Up the ladder:
My Angel
Down the ladder:
The Smarts aint Stupids
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 5.714286
Posted: October 14, 2002 5:00 AM PDT; Last modified: October 14, 2002 5:00 AM PDTWeighted score: 5.522185 Overall Rank: 2633 Comments:
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Tarquin De La Bog @ 62.7.134.9
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14-Oct-02/5:23 AM
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I think you have opened a can of worms here. Dangerously offensive, but then I like work which challenges the stereotype of acceptableness. 7, for sheer bravado.
I like this poem's subtlety. It works for me.
oh the irony, could cause offense but I like it, it's really good
well done
yoda's aprentice, stick around. You know how much I value your opinion, and tonight I post my Magnum Anus...
This poeme is good, but I would change the title to "WTF?!?!"
But are you really waiting for a plane if you are at work in WTF? I would have liked this more if they had crashed into an airport.
it is amazing how you could talk bad about my work when what you write has no real meaning. simple it may be but anyone can write a few line down and call it a poem.
No, what is amazing is your clear lack of intellect. Tell me, can you feed yourself?
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