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Hard Times (Free verse) by beakism Bullshit, Jesus.
They were my f o p i t
o t r n s
I think you'll find you have
Wheels.
Up the ladder:
The dog that loved a chicken
Down the ladder:
Taffy
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Posted: September 13, 2002 1:27 PM PDT; Last modified: September 13, 2002 1:27 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.852303 Overall Rank: 1556 Comments:
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13-Sep-02/1:32 PM
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has Jesu been out building hotrods AGAIN? didn't god warn him that that would get him in trouble with the LAW?
fucking genius! hillarious and witty. still though, i really don't like you very much as a person, so piss off. 10.!
I'm ashamed of you, beakism. Not only are you a shameless thief, you are also an heinous misquoter! Good day.
Ah, but is there any poetry but theft? And in any case, how dare you besmirch my bad name: I would never consider the dastardity required to thieve an entire work.
.. like the footprints ( new to me ) ... makes it a concrete poem ? ... w==h==e==e==l==s perhaps ... 4
Is that a "Christ on a bike" reference? Amusing.7.
*laughing* great I tell you...I've thouht kinda the same several times while I've read "footprints"...bullcrap :)
LMAO
that's low. express your sorrow to him through work in literature.read some of my work
Wonderful, 9
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