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I never Knew..... (Other) by SkateBoardGurl5799
Push....Those were the first words I heard when i first came into this world. I saw My mother and I knew she would be the best. 13 Months later i said my first words. Wuv you.I saw my mom crying and I thought She was sad but she was happy. 4 years later I got a dad. He was ok but he hit My mom so he left. I never Knew i would end up this way it just happened.(dont ask why) for my 7th birthday, i got a cake with a barbie on top of it. I loved that cake. For my 11th Birthday i got a cupcake. For my 15th Birthday i got a I.O.U I never knew that for my 16th Birthday that i would meet this guy named Rob. He was so Special to me,He was also so faithful to me. I never knew that 10 months later i would be on crack,beer,acid,and also on the streets. My mom dishonored me and so did everyone else that i thought i once knew and loved. I slept on a Bench... and Rob? He was out with another Girl. I met this other guy named Andy. He got me An Apartment and back on my feet. I was also Clean for 3 months until.....I never knew that i would be back on drugs and also 9 months pregnant! I had the Baby aready,And the first words my baby heard were Push... And i hope that last words it will ever hear wont be.............I never knew

Up the ladder: My cousin's baby sitter.

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.0
Weighted score: 4.0
Overall Rank: 13382
Posted: August 9, 2002 2:03 PM PDT; Last modified: August 9, 2002 2:03 PM PDT
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[10] titan69 @ 195.93.49.169 | 9-Aug-02/2:11 PM | Reply
THAT IS JUST SO GOOD
KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK.KEEP OF THE BIG D>>>>>>>>>
[3] Bachus @ 24.126.113.154 | 9-Aug-02/2:18 PM | Reply
Welcome to life. Child. Don't push. Pull. Pull me out. I have drugs and park benches gallore. In fact mother says I can have a slumber party this weekend! Do you have friends. I don't, so bring some, and I will provide you with your weakness. Living life! You can't say no to anything that destroys you. You don't love yourself, but I love you! Yes I love the weak. Yes, I love you! More than you'll ever know. We love you. Your poem lingers like my stink finger. Salutations. Meander on.
[n/a] SkateBoardGurl5799 @ | 9-Aug-02/2:28 PM | Reply
Such a old withered up fisherman. I have you know that all of my poems are fiction! if they are real i put more into them and im sorry to hear that ur life is full of confused thoughts dead fish,park benches and drugs but mine is not! anywho thanx for the comment!
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 217.39.156.52 | 9-Aug-02/3:28 PM | Reply
blah blah blah I like hanging with friends blah blah and being myself blah blah blah skateboarding blah blah joking around and being a fun person! blah blah blah
[4] pete @ 194.222.69.43 | 10-Aug-02/2:36 PM | Reply
.... would be good if it meant something ...
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 81.86.113.159 | 11-Aug-02/9:51 PM | Reply
No it wouldn't.
[2] Tarquin De La Bog @ 62.6.114.118 | 14-Aug-02/6:05 PM | Reply
This is awful. 2. The structure is nice but it is far too long and in need of a larger vocabulary.
[4] lexxie100 @ 71.101.237.16 | 5-Jul-07/2:13 PM | Reply
sounds like another tragic washed-up teenage story. far too common.
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