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My Mamma's Hands (Free verse) by amateurR
Kitchen knife cut adorned
Garlic redolent
Fingernails pragmatic
Dishing out that disgusting
Clump of hair
From the bathtub drain
With finesse unparalleled
My sister's hair plaited
Shoelaces tied
Neat for school
Cheese sandwich toasted
Orange juice squeezed and chilled
Ready to serve
Stillness grips
Chilly, very cold
Pragmatic fingernails blue
I painted them red.
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.090909
Weighted score: 5.0454545
Overall Rank: 6961
Posted: September 13, 2002 11:23 PM PDT; Last modified: September 13, 2002 11:23 PM PDT
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yes..it is right..death was the picture i was trying to paint..my mom passed away 4 years ago. thanx once again.