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memory

Member since 2002 · Posted 26 Nov 2002 · 4 comments

Sleep is elusive but thoughts are inclusive and contain everything the pain the stain the sound of the rain on the roof the night I became never the same again

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[2] ==Doylum 26-Nov-02/4:18 PM Reply

some days it really isn't worth chewing through the leather straps

[8] <~> 26-Nov-02/8:28 PM Reply

bites. hard. and that's good. have an 8

[7] Caducus 27-Nov-02/6:20 AM Reply

Yhis would be an excellent chorus, sell it to Alanis Morissette - Nice one Goose, 8 for a song 6 for a poem so heres a 7

[9] Beaner99 27-Nov-02/8:13 AM Reply

Short and to the point and hard hitting. Good Stuff.