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memory (Free verse) by Goose

Sleep is elusive but thoughts are inclusive and contain everything the pain the stain the sound of the rain on the roof the night I became never the same again

Caducus 27-Nov-02/6:20 AM
Yhis would be an excellent chorus, sell it to Alanis Morissette - Nice one Goose, 8 for a song 6 for a poem so heres a 7




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