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My Mamma's Hands (Free verse) by amateurR

Kitchen knife cut adorned Garlic redolent Fingernails pragmatic Dishing out that disgusting Clump of hair From the bathtub drain With finesse unparalleled My sister's hair plaited Shoelaces tied Neat for school Cheese sandwich toasted Orange juice squeezed and chilled Ready to serve Stillness grips Chilly, very cold Pragmatic fingernails blue I painted them red.

pete 13-Sep-02/11:41 PM
pragmatic fingernails an interesting phrase but should only be used once ,or if intentionally reversed closer together ... paints a picture of death .... is that right ? .. 4




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