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The Girl Who Wasn't Me (Free verse) by psychedelic You are like a flower
Soft petals, sweet perfume
You look so fragile
Delicate to touch
Though strong-willed inside
You are lovable
Everyone wants you around
In fact, too lovable
That all he sees is you
His smile is yours
His laugh is yours
HE IS YOURS
...and I'm alone
Up the ladder:
Bare Feet
Down the ladder:
Dreaming What Seems To Be
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 5.6
Posted: August 12, 2002 9:58 AM PDT; Last modified: August 12, 2002 9:58 AM PDTWeighted score: 5.0715218 Overall Rank: 6516 Comments:
you are indeed alone but i wonder why acid-awareness doesn't make this joyful
pete: huh?
I think pete is an old man who lives in a blue shed on the outskirts of Utah and puts roadkill in vinegar for a hobby.
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