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The Girl Who Wasn't Me

Member since 2002 · Posted 12 Aug 2002 · 5 comments

You are like a flower Soft petals, sweet perfume You look so fragile Delicate to touch Though strong-willed inside You are lovable Everyone wants you around In fact, too lovable That all he sees is you His smile is yours His laugh is yours HE IS YOURS ...and I'm alone

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[8] titan69 12-Aug-02/1:19 PM Reply

nice one! allways like like your stuff im just going to look at your
next one 8/10

[2] pete 12-Aug-02/2:09 PM Reply

you are indeed alone but i wonder why acid-awareness doesn't make this joyful

[n/a] psychedelic 13-Aug-02/5:44 AM Reply

pete: huh?

[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 13-Aug-02/5:45 AM Reply

I think pete is an old man who lives in a blue shed on the outskirts of Utah and puts roadkill in vinegar for a hobby.

[8] FadedHappiness 25-Aug-04/4:31 AM Reply

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