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The Girl Who Wasn't Me (Free verse) by psychedelic

You are like a flower Soft petals, sweet perfume You look so fragile Delicate to touch Though strong-willed inside You are lovable Everyone wants you around In fact, too lovable That all he sees is you His smile is yours His laugh is yours HE IS YOURS ...and I'm alone

titan69 12-Aug-02/1:19 PM
nice one! allways like like your stuff im just going to look at your
next one 8/10




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