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constructed word poem #6

by david

Member since 2002 · Posted 12 Aug 2002 · 3 comments

These blue mountains, ubiquitous in tendency, have shown us how to love. Cut over time by spiteful lovers, these highway roads running through tree-thick flesh like mechanical delineations are testament to an unfailing conciliation, to a silent but hesitant assent from a love that rarely yearns for a taste of control.

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[2] pete 12-Aug-02/2:26 PM Reply
ubiquitous in tendency,. mmmmm nice
[7] god'swife 24-Aug-02/10:52 AM Reply
silent but hesitant doesn't gell. can't something be silent and hesitant? otherwise 7
[n/a] david 26-Aug-02/12:05 PM Reply
I can imagine it would. You don't necessarily have to audibly respond to something in order to have hesitation. Can someone not hesitate to commit an action (conceivably, when there's nobody around to talk to)?