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constructed word poem #6 (Free verse) by david

These blue mountains, ubiquitous in tendency, have shown us how to love. Cut over time by spiteful lovers, these highway roads running through tree-thick flesh like mechanical delineations are testament to an unfailing conciliation, to a silent but hesitant assent from a love that rarely yearns for a taste of control.

god'swife 24-Aug-02/10:52 AM
silent but hesitant doesn't gell. can't something be silent and hesitant? otherwise 7




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