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20 most recent comments by <~> (141-160) and replies

Re: Toku by Bill Z Bub 21-Oct-03/4:56 PM
http://www.geocities.com/mossfarmpotluck/toku
Re: a comment on water falls by Bill Z Bub 21-Oct-03/2:23 AM
bub?
Re: Kites, Gunpowder, and a Chair by Geschäftsreise 15-Oct-03/10:45 AM
one who?
Re: Kites, Gunpowder, and a Chair by Geschäftsreise 15-Oct-03/10:44 AM
not to be televised, live.
Re: Pet Hatreds by Bobjim 15-Oct-03/10:43 AM
how wonderfully ironic!
Re: Facing Goodbye by Caducus 15-Oct-03/9:25 AM
CAD,
nice start.
this is a lovely tribute, but in terms off its poetics, it could use a revamp. the last stanza is definitely the weakest.

good to see you writing again.
Re: For M. B. by Tits 15-Oct-03/8:37 AM
never figured you for a deleter.

ah, me.
Re: a comment on 195.157.153.253 by <~> 14-Oct-03/6:22 AM
for the longest time, i thought you were settle. i was fooled!
Re: a comment on مصادر فلسطينية أن الاحتلال by Wobble McFly 13-Oct-03/5:06 PM
any chaance, oh ambiguously gendered traveller, of posting what you've come up with, for those of us who've been blacklisted by gwb by registering at ajeeb, only to find out that we need $30 to get the answer?

i am an ignorant american, and my language skills are poor.
Re: مصادر فلسطينية أن الاحتلال by Wobble McFly 13-Oct-03/12:18 PM
"لجهاد الإسلامي في بل"????

no way!!!
Re: Not On Your Nelly by Wobble McFly 13-Oct-03/12:17 PM
indeed. what inspired said muck?
Re: a comment on Why? by MercedezDream 13-Oct-03/12:09 PM
same to you!
Re: For W. by A. Nomaly 12-Oct-03/7:31 PM
line breaks--why? no werkie, comme ca.
Re: Billy and the voices by SupremeDreamer 12-Oct-03/7:22 PM
i think that coming right out with cognizance of your disorder ruins the surprise, lee.

it's quite entertaining, the 'or so they say' refrain. but the opening needs work. imo.
Re: a comment on Reptilian by Christof 10-Oct-03/10:58 AM
what about "brownitude"?
i've always fancied that variant.
Re: a comment on A History of Truth by Blue Magpie 9-Oct-03/12:39 PM
Dear Blue Magpie,

I apaolgize for my mistaken accusation. I was wrong about the misspellings. I have been a horrible mood today, and you bore the brunt of it.

I stand corrected.
Re: Reptilian by Christof 9-Oct-03/11:34 AM
and that's when the kundalini kicks in, isn't it?
you bastard snake.
Re: a comment on Timmy Christ didn't like Dr. Seuss by Y2kSlamPoet 9-Oct-03/9:01 AM
for me, it reads like a blow to the head with a wet text-book. and believe me, i know PLENTY about that!!!
Re: a comment on Spider Spider (A Parody in Form) by Blue Magpie 9-Oct-03/8:01 AM
more like the mucus, less like the d.,dsdj???js.
Re: A History of Truth by Blue Magpie 9-Oct-03/7:17 AM
you have some desperate misspelling here, my friend. the one that stands out most glaringly is "the Pilot". at first, i thought you were writing a parody. but then i realized that you were referring to Pontius Pilate.

there are some good ideas in here, but your long-winded discourse loses steam before it gets barely started.


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