Re: Toku by Bill Z Bub |
21-Oct-03/4:56 PM |
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Re: a comment on water falls by Bill Z Bub |
21-Oct-03/2:23 AM |
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Re: Kites, Gunpowder, and a Chair by Geschäftsreise |
15-Oct-03/10:45 AM |
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Re: Kites, Gunpowder, and a Chair by Geschäftsreise |
15-Oct-03/10:44 AM |
not to be televised, live.
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Re: Pet Hatreds by Bobjim |
15-Oct-03/10:43 AM |
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Re: Facing Goodbye by Caducus |
15-Oct-03/9:25 AM |
CAD,
nice start.
this is a lovely tribute, but in terms off its poetics, it could use a revamp. the last stanza is definitely the weakest.
good to see you writing again.
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Re: For M. B. by Tits |
15-Oct-03/8:37 AM |
never figured you for a deleter.
ah, me.
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Re: a comment on 195.157.153.253 by <~> |
14-Oct-03/6:22 AM |
for the longest time, i thought you were settle. i was fooled!
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Re: a comment on Ù
صادر ÙÙسطÙÙÙØ© أ٠اÙاØتÙا٠by Wobble McFly |
13-Oct-03/5:06 PM |
any chaance, oh ambiguously gendered traveller, of posting what you've come up with, for those of us who've been blacklisted by gwb by registering at ajeeb, only to find out that we need $30 to get the answer?
i am an ignorant american, and my language skills are poor.
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Re: Ù
صادر ÙÙسطÙÙÙØ© أ٠اÙاØتÙا٠by Wobble McFly |
13-Oct-03/12:18 PM |
"ÙجÙاد اÙإسÙاÙ
Ù Ù٠بÙ"????
no way!!!
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Re: Not On Your Nelly by Wobble McFly |
13-Oct-03/12:17 PM |
indeed. what inspired said muck?
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Re: a comment on Why? by MercedezDream |
13-Oct-03/12:09 PM |
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Re: For W. by A. Nomaly |
12-Oct-03/7:31 PM |
line breaks--why? no werkie, comme ca.
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Re: Billy and the voices by SupremeDreamer |
12-Oct-03/7:22 PM |
i think that coming right out with cognizance of your disorder ruins the surprise, lee.
it's quite entertaining, the 'or so they say' refrain. but the opening needs work. imo.
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Re: a comment on Reptilian by Christof |
10-Oct-03/10:58 AM |
what about "brownitude"?
i've always fancied that variant.
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Re: a comment on A History of Truth by Blue Magpie |
9-Oct-03/12:39 PM |
Dear Blue Magpie,
I apaolgize for my mistaken accusation. I was wrong about the misspellings. I have been a horrible mood today, and you bore the brunt of it.
I stand corrected.
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Re: Reptilian by Christof |
9-Oct-03/11:34 AM |
and that's when the kundalini kicks in, isn't it?
you bastard snake.
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Re: a comment on Timmy Christ didn't like Dr. Seuss by Y2kSlamPoet |
9-Oct-03/9:01 AM |
for me, it reads like a blow to the head with a wet text-book. and believe me, i know PLENTY about that!!!
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Re: a comment on Spider Spider (A Parody in Form) by Blue Magpie |
9-Oct-03/8:01 AM |
more like the mucus, less like the d.,dsdj???js.
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Re: A History of Truth by Blue Magpie |
9-Oct-03/7:17 AM |
you have some desperate misspelling here, my friend. the one that stands out most glaringly is "the Pilot". at first, i thought you were writing a parody. but then i realized that you were referring to Pontius Pilate.
there are some good ideas in here, but your long-winded discourse loses steam before it gets barely started.
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