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Ode № 69683

For W.

by A. Nomaly

Member since 2002 · Posted 10 Oct 2003 · 6 comments

your love is like soaking in rust colored pools of human sweat and seltzer water collected naturally in the shaded krooks of the letter E

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6 comments

[10] sliver 10-Oct-03/8:34 PM Reply
Hmm, don't like her much eh? Read some of mine, tell me what you drink-er think.
[9] Bachus 10-Oct-03/8:52 PM Reply
Indeed, a killer.
[n/a] Shuushin 11-Oct-03/5:23 AM Reply
woah.
[7] peaceseeker 12-Oct-03/9:55 AM Reply
Is that "E" for ecstasy?
I liked your analogy.
[n/a] <~> 12-Oct-03/7:31 PM Reply
line breaks--why? no werkie, comme ca.
[4] LilMsLadyPoet 8-Jun-05/9:23 PM Reply
okay...at least this one made me stop to pause, and think, and then try to picture what you said here. I think I'll give THIS one something above a 2...(my 6th one to read on this site)At the least, I think it is interesting, though I am not a fan of this type of piece...at the most, I think you make the reader wonder what lies beneath and behind such a statement. I would like to see this expanded and elaborated on...I suggest continuing the thought started here.It does not seem complete...but perhaps it is, as only you can say.