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For W. (Ode) by A. Nomaly

your love is like soaking in rust colored pools of human sweat and seltzer water collected naturally in the shaded krooks of the letter E

LilMsLadyPoet 8-Jun-05/9:23 PM
okay...at least this one made me stop to pause, and think, and then try to picture what you said here. I think I'll give THIS one something above a 2...(my 6th one to read on this site)At the least, I think it is interesting, though I am not a fan of this type of piece...at the most, I think you make the reader wonder what lies beneath and behind such a statement. I would like to see this expanded and elaborated on...I suggest continuing the thought started here.It does not seem complete...but perhaps it is, as only you can say.




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