Free verse № 112039

corrupting me

Member since 2001 · Posted 10 Sep 2004 · 4 comments

scream softly enough as you crawl up my throat and out of my stomach with robes of vomit, and, i just might find a second to align my eyes with yours before you suck them out. Don't worry my love, we all have to die eventually, far be it for me to protest my own death prematurely. Just please assure me That the worms that eat me will never have touched you.

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[8] Dovina 10-Sep-04/11:57 AM Reply

Good rant.

[9] Brandy_n_Cali 10-Sep-04/5:35 PM Reply

nice

[10] LintyWeenis 11-Sep-04/5:20 PM Reply

Ooh. This goes on the favorite tab. Nice.

[10] sliver 7-Nov-04/2:03 PM Reply

ouch