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corrupting me (Free verse) by skaskowski
scream softly enough as you crawl up my throat and out of my stomach with robes of vomit, and, i just might find a second to align my eyes with yours before you suck them out. Don't worry my love, we all have to die eventually, far be it for me to protest my own death prematurely. Just please assure me That the worms that eat me will never have touched you.
Up the ladder: Panda meat
Down the ladder: I'm there
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.857143
Weighted score: 5.4994626
Overall Rank: 2747
Posted: September 10, 2004 7:47 AM PDT; Last modified: September 10, 2004 7:47 AM PDT
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Comments:
[8] Dovina @ 24.52.157.176 | 10-Sep-04/11:57 AM | Reply
Good rant.
[9] Brandy_n_Cali @ 4.182.254.104 | 10-Sep-04/5:35 PM | Reply
nice
[10] LintyWeenis @ 152.163.101.10 | 11-Sep-04/5:20 PM | Reply
Ooh. This goes on the favorite tab. Nice.
[10] sliver @ 63.189.1.34 | 7-Nov-04/2:03 PM | Reply
ouch
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