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submission to decay (Free verse) by FreeFormFixation
a rake scrapes across the concrete, skull fragments in strips across the
green lawns.
as well as
dark brown red and yellow leaves
piled in insurmountable hills,
i run like a maniac
and dive face first into their
fragrant embrace.
the sky sits blue like a mother hen
on the earth, her egg,
soon to hatch and shake off
the lives of mites and other surface creatures,
the shell cast off into space carelessly.
i lost count of the tremors,
eighteen months now of constant fear
that the end is near,
we're all choking
on the words they feed
through tubes down our throats
in our living rooms.
we all wait
to awake from this nightmare,
a cloud of steam erupts from a crack
in the surface,
we worthlessy run like the mercy of some
supreme power is going to
pull and protect
our scurrying forms
from the cosmic defect
not realized when the clock
was originally assembled.
tick tock tick tock continued, continues to tick and tock
the universe heaves and breathes
we drop
like leaves from its branches,
piled up and decaying.
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.857143
Weighted score: 5.4994626
Overall Rank: 2745
Posted: November 10, 2003 11:42 AM PST; Last modified: November 10, 2003 11:42 AM PST
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