Free verse № 74595
submission to decay
a rake scrapes across the concrete, skull fragments in strips across the green lawns.
as well as
dark brown red and yellow leaves
piled in insurmountable hills,
i run like a maniac
and dive face first into their
fragrant embrace.
the sky sits blue like a mother hen
on the earth, her egg,
soon to hatch and shake off
the lives of mites and other surface creatures,
the shell cast off into space carelessly.
i lost count of the tremors,
eighteen months now of constant fear
that the end is near,
we're all choking
on the words they feed
through tubes down our throats
in our living rooms.
we all wait
to awake from this nightmare,
a cloud of steam erupts from a crack
in the surface,
we worthlessy run like the mercy of some
supreme power is going to
pull and protect
our scurrying forms
from the cosmic defect
not realized when the clock
was originally assembled.
tick tock tick tock continued, continues to tick and tock
the universe heaves and breathes
we drop
like leaves from its branches,
piled up and decaying.
6 comments
I like some of the description, perhaps the analysis needs to be a bit deeper than 'the world is going to end, it is all our fault'.
In that case I think the poem would benefit from drawing the two together rather than mentioning human defects, universe defects apart.
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