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He

by BigB

Member since 2004 · Posted 30 Aug 2004 · 4 comments

He longed for you. But where were you? You came and went. He said to you. But were you listening? You shut your ears. He stood and waited. But you never did came. You were cuddled in another's arms. And now you'll pay.

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4 comments

[7] Dovina 30-Aug-04/9:47 AM Reply
Too many possible interpretations for my taste. I'm sure you know what you mean, and if I did, I would probably like this poem better.
[5] Bachus 30-Aug-04/11:02 AM Reply
"But you never did came"? Good one, very Arkansass.
[n/a] BigB 31-Aug-04/6:26 AM Reply
agreed. I'll take note.
[10] Brandy_n_Cali 31-Aug-04/8:11 PM Reply
NICE POEM!!! TRULY!!!