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He (Free verse) by BigB

He longed for you. But where were you? You came and went. He said to you. But were you listening? You shut your ears. He stood and waited. But you never did came. You were cuddled in another's arms. And now you'll pay.

Dovina 30-Aug-04/9:47 AM
Too many possible interpretations for my taste. I'm sure you know what you mean, and if I did, I would probably like this poem better.




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