Re: Take Four by NanceXToo	19-Apr-04/4:11 PM
nice acrobatics, sound-wise.
Re: my hunger has become a hunger for revenge by nentwined	3-Dec-03/12:40 PM
and they'll have fun fun fun 'til her daddy burns her honda away....
Re: null by Bill Z Bub	19-Nov-03/11:32 AM
what did you delete?
Re: a comment on Mi Casa es Su Casa by <~>	19-Nov-03/8:54 AM
read, baby. Read. it's the answer to both.
Re: hall panful by skaskowski	19-Nov-03/8:49 AM
half great, all fun
Re: The Turner Prize by Mona Lisa	19-Nov-03/8:45 AM
sums it up, all right.
Re: Shouting at dogs by Bobjim	10-Nov-03/7:07 PM
you amuse me again, bobjim. thankee.
Re: Naylor's Handbag by Bobjim	7-Nov-03/6:18 PM
bravo, sir.
Re: a comment on EarthWaterAir - Hey! Look! IM MR FIRE! by Y2kSlamPoet	28-Oct-03/4:29 PM
you're parody is made not credible by the sheer lack of cerical errors.
Re: Teaching Beetles To Swim by Bobjim	28-Oct-03/8:29 AM
i enjoyed this more than anything i have read here in months. thank you. only one line interfered with my pleasure: "That it's them sing (not me)," i thing should be reanimated to: It's them that sing, (not me),
Re: My deepest thoughts by poetandknowit	24-Oct-03/6:51 PM
Behave yourself, Senor Burro!!!!!!!
Re: lost love by cherish	24-Oct-03/6:40 AM
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Re: a comment on Backyard by <~>	24-Oct-03/6:32 AM
yes. it was a workshop exercise. less than i wanted, but filled the requirement. difficult to write, because of the restrictions.
Re: a comment on Mr. America (Hunting Season) by SupremeDreamer	22-Oct-03/2:30 PM
okay, so if hunting was not you base metaphor, what is? help a stupid blonde out, wouldja?
Re: glimpses by nentwined	22-Oct-03/11:56 AM
nice language, k. you have managed to paint it without a tick on dr. carawax's list. bueno.
Re: a comment on My Chocolate F-9 by abecedarian	22-Oct-03/11:37 AM
what about the varnish? talk about the pines that gave it, and how patient they were to give their blood for the sharpened D of eternity. maybe you drink a chocolate colored guiness (or 2) while you wait for the chocolate varnish to dry. the last quatrain--just scrap it, and go from there. why do we run out of steam like that, i wonder?
Re: a comment on Toku by Bill Z Bub	22-Oct-03/12:41 AM
i was not disagreeing with you about your critique of the poem. i was merely noting that you were cranky tonight,.
Re: a comment on Toku by Bill Z Bub	22-Oct-03/12:40 AM
remind me not to type when i am falling asleep, next time.
Re: a comment on Toku by Bill Z Bub	21-Oct-03/7:40 PM
even out here in the sticks, we know about john bly and his 'masterpiece'. i did not HAVE to post that page. i agree with you that the poem needs a little more framing. but i believe it captures the joy the guy was feeling. i was not arguing taht point; i was merely observing that you are, once again, cranky. you may not feel cranky, but it comes across that way in print. cranker. that point stands.
Re: a comment on Toku by Bill Z Bub	21-Oct-03/7:28 PM
jeez you are cranky tonight. are you sure you're not holed up in a john????? leave hatters hare alone--she has bushels of green tomatos and her pig farts when she gets into them! the things she has to contend with!!