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lost love (Free verse) by cherish Now that your gone what do I do?
You want to move on but I only love you.
I cant believe this happened but it did.
Its true, true that my life is messed up and screwed.
I dont know what to think nor do or say.
But I know what I wish for, a better life, no pain.
No one can understand how I felt yesterday.
No one knows how I still love you today.
Today tomorrow and the next day on.
I love you until the end when we are both gone.
Still what will I do until that day comes?
My heart hurts bad and my body is numb.
My head aches from heartaches of my lost love.
Also in hopes of one day being together one day up above.
Up the ladder:
You wouldn't know God from Adam
Down the ladder:
Baked Peach Cobbler Windowed
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 6.114286
Posted: January 6, 2003 3:45 PM PST; Last modified: January 6, 2003 3:45 PM PSTWeighted score: 6.113912 Overall Rank: 1099 Comments:
Excellent work. 10.
Pretty Unique. 10.
I know what u mean. Asl?
At least it isn't ascii art am I right lol 10
Rort. Abort. Have a 01!, which is 10 factorial reflected in your hand mirror.
I wish I could give it a 3628800 lol I wish someone would give one of my poems a 362880.
I'd crank it up to 11 if I could dude. nice one, I know what ur going through.
lol spinal tap lol
holy mallard helicopters cherish (not that I'm into aeronautic persuits) but this gets my vote as the most interesting piece I've read all week. Have a 10, mang.
So you're the new girl everyone's talking about. Eh, I'll give you a 9.
I especially like the last 2 lines. Have a well deserved 10. The craft of this is pretty great.
yes, i concure, do you concure horus?o
You know it lol asl?
It is pretty wonderful. I want to see more work like this - a lot more. Create a new username for yourself if you have to.
I think she should work on quality, not quanitity
I think she should work on both. Altough to be frank I don't think it's right to have like 100 usernames, it messes with poemranker.
lol you wanna say that to horus' face I thought not lol
indubitably..oh, you meant horus horus..my bad. still, i do indeed agree wholeheartedly without hesitation.
Dude ur horus I'm your numero uno fan!! I got like a mondo picture of u stole it from supercuts lol
not ony will i foster the motion to send this poem straight to uranus, but i'll smile all the way through
until i hit poo. ANARCHY!!!!!!!!!! <mayday mayday baboons have infiltrated the joy luck club and car wash, we are doomed may day>i
i wrote you song for your sexy achievement..enjoy
yours truly http://gangbox.com/mp3/thorn%20apple%20t
liked this immensely 9
zactly. To the point. Wel written. Up above though? I still believe in it and have faith, but no devotion. Hey Check out may I still my heart or something like that. I think that we both write love well. And many ppl do speak of you. That is one of the first positive things that darky has said. She jests at ppl that are a threat to her. Prepare she will try to twist the blade in your back.
DAMN DIS IS WELL WRITTEN POEM NO DOUBT OF A 10 IF I COULD I WILL GO HIGHER BUT I CANT SORRY
lame
Well written
lamer
lamest
Nice volvo, but are you -=Dark_Angel=-?
No.
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I love this poem too. It is one of my favoritis that I wrote. I have another I have to put on here soon you need to read.
I wrote this one and the one I am talking about above bc me n my boyfriend. LONG STORY...-cherish