poemranker ::null by Bill Z Bub

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by Bill Z Bub

Member since 2002 · Posted 20 Jul 2003 · Edited 19 Nov 2003 · 15 comments

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15 comments

[10] horus8 20-Jul-03/11:22 PM Reply
That's why you're a pro mate. Fantastic work here, just damn fine craftsmanship.
[10] hipster flare 21-Jul-03/8:59 AM Reply
Fantastic. but why is this a pimple poem?
[n/a] Bill Z Bub › hipster flare 22-Jul-03/6:44 PM Reply
Because writing it gave me a big fat zit on my forehead?
[10] horus8 › Bill Z Bub 19-Nov-03/1:48 PM Reply
lol.
[n/a] zzinnia66 21-Jul-03/10:29 AM Reply
nice, but i'm confused by the tease of the the sister. do you man-mandle july, or her sister, or both?
[n/a] Bill Z Bub › zzinnia66 22-Jul-03/6:43 PM Reply
Does it matter? As it reads, would you say it was July's sister?
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The names have been changed to protect the innocent and/or guilty.
[10] SupremeDreamer 22-Jul-03/7:12 PM Reply
i feel small.. ;/ 10.
[n/a] Bill Z Bub › SupremeDreamer 17-Aug-03/2:55 PM Reply
thanks.

nothing new to see here, I just changed July to June.
[10] SupremeDreamer › Bill Z Bub 18-Aug-03/4:31 AM Reply
i see
[8] EAger to Offend 23-Jul-03/5:12 PM Reply
Ah, cat-tails. the ultimate phalic symbol.
It was clearly the sister following in July's footsteps.
[10] eliastemplar 18-Aug-03/9:59 AM Reply
mmmmm...poon tang. A wonderful flowing description of the girl that is intermingled with the act itself. They are one and the same. Excellent, it read smoothly.
[n/a] <~> 18-Aug-03/12:05 PM Reply
bill there are still too many extra words. e.g., what could the bra be _but_ discarded.? etc.

cut it down, because it's raw. it's pittsburgh, baby. seared outside, raw, in.
[9] razorgrin 10-Sep-03/6:55 AM Reply
Mighty. Your kung-fu is awesome.
[n/a] <~> 19-Nov-03/11:32 AM Reply
what did you delete?
[n/a] INTRANSIT 19-Nov-03/12:46 PM Reply
is poemranker confused? or has some fusible link fried?