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null (Other) by Bill Z Bub
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Arithmetic Mean: 0.25
Weighted score: 4.433786
Overall Rank: 12897
Posted: July 20, 2003 10:04 PM PDT; Last modified: November 19, 2003 9:27 AM PST
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[10] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 20-Jul-03/11:22 PM | Reply
That's why you're a pro mate. Fantastic work here, just damn fine craftsmanship.
[10] hipster flare @ 209.68.98.161 | 21-Jul-03/8:59 AM | Reply
Fantastic. but why is this a pimple poem?
[n/a] Bill Z Bub @ 24.112.182.9 > hipster flare | 22-Jul-03/6:44 PM | Reply
Because writing it gave me a big fat zit on my forehead?
[10] horus8 @ 24.126.116.54 > Bill Z Bub | 19-Nov-03/1:48 PM | Reply
lol.
[n/a] zzinnia66 @ 167.206.181.179 | 21-Jul-03/10:29 AM | Reply
nice, but i'm confused by the tease of the the sister. do you man-mandle july, or her sister, or both?
[n/a] Bill Z Bub @ 24.112.182.9 > zzinnia66 | 22-Jul-03/6:43 PM | Reply
Does it matter? As it reads, would you say it was July's sister?
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The names have been changed to protect the innocent and/or guilty.
[10] SupremeDreamer @ 204.31.181.119 | 22-Jul-03/7:12 PM | Reply
i feel small.. ;/ 10.
[n/a] Bill Z Bub @ 24.112.182.238 > SupremeDreamer | 17-Aug-03/2:55 PM | Reply
thanks.

nothing new to see here, I just changed July to June.
[10] SupremeDreamer @ 63.93.107.183 > Bill Z Bub | 18-Aug-03/4:31 AM | Reply
i see
[8] EAger to Offend @ 65.95.229.170 | 23-Jul-03/5:12 PM | Reply
Ah, cat-tails. the ultimate phalic symbol.
It was clearly the sister following in July's footsteps.
[10] eliastemplar @ 216.147.132.7 | 18-Aug-03/9:59 AM | Reply
mmmmm...poon tang. A wonderful flowing description of the girl that is intermingled with the act itself. They are one and the same. Excellent, it read smoothly.
[n/a] <~> @ 167.206.181.179 | 18-Aug-03/12:05 PM | Reply
bill there are still too many extra words. e.g., what could the bra be _but_ discarded.? etc.

cut it down, because it's raw. it's pittsburgh, baby. seared outside, raw, in.
[9] razorgrin @ 192.197.142.103 | 10-Sep-03/6:55 AM | Reply
Mighty. Your kung-fu is awesome.
[n/a] <~> @ 167.206.181.179 | 19-Nov-03/11:32 AM | Reply
what did you delete?
[n/a] INTRANSIT @ 64.12.96.46 | 19-Nov-03/12:46 PM | Reply
is poemranker confused? or has some fusible link fried?
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