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null (Other) by Bill Z Bub

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<~> 18-Aug-03/12:05 PM
bill there are still too many extra words. e.g., what could the bra be _but_ discarded.? etc.

cut it down, because it's raw. it's pittsburgh, baby. seared outside, raw, in.




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