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Free verse № 46444

The sky is falling

Member since 2002 · Posted 8 Apr 2003 · 6 comments

Oh no, Saddams in trouble Sorry Saddam, Gotta burst that bubble We're gonna get you and all your doubles First strike close we got his stubble Reducing Iraq to pieces of rubble Before he starts a war you can see from the Hubble.

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[n/a] <~> 8-Apr-03/8:30 AM Reply
hahahaha.
[n/a] Mr Pig 8-Apr-03/9:30 AM Reply
I did find the picture of the American and British soldiers quite hilarious of them 'chilling' on may say in his palace smoking.

[n/a] poetandknowit 8-Apr-03/11:05 AM Reply
Quit reading Calvin Trillin.
[0] asimpleman 9-Apr-03/6:47 AM Reply
Intransit feels sorry he couldn't be blown up and become a dead hero......hahahaha......don't worry there's always n.korea....
[n/a] INTRANSIT › asimpleman 9-Apr-03/7:13 PM Reply
Look everyone!! It's Sodomy Hussein!!!!
[0] asimpleman › INTRANSIT 11-Apr-03/3:35 AM Reply
Sodomy eh?.......its k child abuse can b cured.....provided u don't get urself blown up first.......hahaha