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Always And Forever (Free verse) by Pooh_N_His_Honey
Standing here today with you by my side Heaven must describe what I feel inside Always and forever I'll give to you my love Never will there be another for me to think of No one could love you nearly as much as I do Only you will have all my love that's strong and true Nothing could ever take my love away And never will this heart of mine ever go astray Never will I leave you or ever break your heart Darling I'll love you forever, we'll never be apart Passion and desire will be yours for all time All the love you could need, I?m giving you all mine Unconditional commitment I vow, my love, to you Love and devotion is what I offer too Anytime you need me I'll be here when you call Living my life to love you and catch you if you fall Watching over you with tender loving care And hoping you remember for you I'll always be there You are the love of my life, my fondest dream come true So today I want to say that I will forever be in love with you

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Arithmetic Mean: 0.25
Weighted score: 4.433786
Overall Rank: 12919
Posted: February 10, 2003 4:04 PM PST; Last modified: February 10, 2003 4:04 PM PST
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[1] Robert K Foster @ 209.68.66.6 | 23-May-03/10:37 AM | Reply
Haiku
The haiku is a japanese poetry form, evolved from the renga during the 16th century. It is a three line, unrhymed set of seventeed syllables (5-7-5).

It is typically a pair of contrasting concrete/sensory images, with each image so dependant on the other that the whole thing collapses if one word is altered.

this is neither good nor a haiku. maple syrup on sugar on a pile of trite pancakes.
[0] fevriere @ 81.106.209.141 | 6-Mar-04/9:12 AM | Reply
This is not a haiku. UH.
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