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hall panful (Free verse) by skaskowski
her hand dripped green
as she pierced the mucus curtain
to pull me from my old home
to her home.
she set my feet on fire
and i danced unwillingly
through an obstacle course,
point A to point C.
"my darling,
your handprints
are etched in my implants,
if chance should sketch
our hideaway's photo
on an eraser,
then i'll replace you with
de-facer."
too gone now to go now.
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Weighted score: 4.7317934
Overall Rank: 11772
Posted: November 19, 2003 12:19 AM PST; Last modified: November 19, 2003 12:19 AM PST
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