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hall panful (Free verse) by skaskowski
her hand dripped green as she pierced the mucus curtain to pull me from my old home to her home. she set my feet on fire and i danced unwillingly through an obstacle course, point A to point C. "my darling, your handprints are etched in my implants, if chance should sketch our hideaway's photo on an eraser, then i'll replace you with de-facer." too gone now to go now.

Up the ladder: Commandment One
Down the ladder: you clinker

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.75
Weighted score: 4.7317934
Overall Rank: 11772
Posted: November 19, 2003 12:19 AM PST; Last modified: November 19, 2003 12:19 AM PST
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[7] <~> @ 167.206.181.179 | 19-Nov-03/8:49 AM | Reply
half great, all fun
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