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Re: a comment on in a singular way by daniella 9-Oct-17/7:33 AM
wow. i don't think i've been here in a decade. i hope all is well with you.
Re: a comment on Going to Michigan for the weekend by <~> 6-Mar-09/6:02 AM
it's been a long time since i've held a shuttle.

and now there's a garden, and hops, lots of hops in michigan, and all else is but a tracing of a memory
Re: for sue (20030815) by nentwined 9-Jul-08/7:47 AM
ha! thanks for the smile, k
:)
Re: a comment on Danse by Limness 25-Apr-07/6:54 AM
check
Re: a comment on The Secret by ecargo 30-Sep-06/10:18 AM
well, it is my moniker, and i give you permission to cheat on this one...
Re: a comment on The Secret by ecargo 30-Sep-06/6:36 AM
ti's a tilde, so you you near rhyme "will do" or something close to that....
Re: a comment on Going to Michigan for the weekend by <~> 30-Sep-06/6:35 AM
thanks, ranger. i'm not sure if i can make this one work without giving away the context. i'd like to get a few more comments before i reveal it.

a friend pointed out that perhaps this one is just for me, but i'd like to be able to publish it. i knwo it needs a lot of work.
Re: Farmhouse, Southern France (storm on arrival) by Ranger 29-Sep-06/1:41 PM
i think you go too far, here, ranger. i know you mean 'sunflower" but solar flower reads as solar flare, to me, at first--not that it will read like that to everyone, but 'flare' is a word often quick on the heels of 'solar'.

you've got some nice descriptions here, but the language gets blustery, rather than omminous, whioch is, i think the mood you want to set for this. although, i could be wrong.

Re: In the hollow (rough) by ecargo 29-Sep-06/1:39 PM
"flashing quick and crosshatched with careless
pricker scrapes;"

oooh. ooh. ooh.
Re: a comment on The Secret by ecargo 29-Sep-06/1:38 PM
hi Ranger!

Re: Wet dreams by ecargo 29-Sep-06/1:37 PM
gorgeous language, e.

'mother bulk' sat well with me. it was the perfect image, for me, to describe the scene.
Re: a fresh start by *.*ReAdY To SnAp.*. 29-Sep-06/1:35 PM
except, lose the last line.
Re: a fresh start by *.*ReAdY To SnAp.*. 29-Sep-06/1:35 PM
the perfect pimple! 10, i say! 10!
Re: Colors of Me by MissUnderstood 29-Sep-06/1:27 PM
do you know about enjambement? it's a useful poetic device. this is an excellent start, but if you didn't end each line so suddenly, i think you could make this baby work overtime.
Re: the secret life of the sundew by pollywolly 29-Sep-06/1:26 PM
don't you mean nectar?

Re: Wyndham by Aetius 29-Sep-06/1:21 PM
LOl.

quite a bit of fun, here, ae
Re: After Fighting (More Blood Edit) by zodiac 27-Jan-06/12:14 AM
hmmm. it had a lot more power as a prose poem, zodiac. not that it's not good like this...just that there was an urgency in the paragraph that's missing here.
Re: Green things by ecargo 16-Jan-06/9:35 AM
"none to straddle worlds or shoulder skies."

is a great line.

"We break us like ice;"

is unclear; what do you mean by this?
Re: a comment on The nymph steals the farm-son by <~> 12-Jan-06/1:51 PM
i know, i know.
Re: a comment on The Hermit on the Thoroughfare by http://mulberryfairy 11-Jan-06/11:33 AM
kinda like Gatsby.


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