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In the hollow (rough) (Free verse) by ecargo
All that summer long, I ran,
when I was 10, with windmill arms
and wind-snatched breath, my brown, bare legs
flashing quick and crosshatched with careless
pricker scrapes; danced one-two double spinning rhythms,
casting small-girl spells on the blacktop
and across the verge, in among the dark boles,
tapping in and out, double-time,
running hollows, where the newts splashed out
in the wet green hours, and I grew to know
the pussy willow spring and seed-pod autumn,
growing round and alien; knew the briar-tangle den,
where, gone to ground, I lay hidden
from the hard hands and jagged
voices and dreamed green underwater
dreams as the evening drew out long
and violet, and the night creatures sang
their soft night songs as the dusk
wrapped itself around us.
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Posted: September 20, 2006 10:40 AM PDT; Last modified: September 20, 2006 10:40 AM PDT
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