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The Hermit on the Thoroughfare (Free verse) by http://mulberryfairy
In this room of living
affectionate appliances mingle with the hermit
her mortal pelvis vibrates
from the deafening impacts of 16 wheeled vehicles
hurled into potholes on their quest
to deliver nourishment to Midcoast brethren.
Those brethren will push their carts, solo
gathering and hunting in Shawsâ aisles
not realizing the way their food has related,
palpated the hermitâs abdomen as intimately
as a uterus full of secret fetus:
kicking, tickling, flickering,
hinting of mortal company to come.
But company wonât come to the hermit.
She interacts only with her cubed trinity:
a silver box speaks her language with a digital accent
a black box radiates sustenance to sterile enzymelessness
a white box preserves frigidity.
Her front door opens onto two feet of littered sidewalk
and, just beyond, Route 1 stares.
Concourse to thousands of Mainers and tourists
who donate soot stains to her siding like Passover blood,
and gritty black dust that creeps through the cracks
onto the baseboards of her living room.
Their soot will engage the hermit,
but the living will never visit.
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.0
Weighted score: 5.119203
Overall Rank: 5702
Posted: January 10, 2006 8:57 PM PST; Last modified: January 10, 2006 8:57 PM PST
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but on a hermit?