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Sorry

Member since 2004 · Posted 24 Jul 2004 · 3 comments

I may have appeared like the moon through the clouds I may have revived your faith and remade your vows I´m sorry I may have sweetened your ears like a poem from Blake I may have rocked your world like an earthquake I´m sorry I may have shined to your eyes like Parisian lights I may have heated your blood like Arabian nights I´m Sorry, For being the blow in your castle of cards For giving you no warm regards I´m sorry For putting you into this crazy drama For making you wish a nightly coma I´m sorry For having your skyscraper swayed For having so many reasons to say I am Sorry.

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[8] INTRANSIT 24-Jul-04/7:08 PM Reply
This dog is rooting. I smell a deeply buried truffle.

Do not become a fungus.
[6] Prince of Void 29-Jul-04/12:32 PM Reply
that was good ..descriping why you are sorry ..is good ..i like it
[10] frdup717 29-Jul-04/8:45 PM Reply
wow
makes me think of my last relationship.
wow