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My deepest thoughts (Free verse) by poetandknowit drip drop
drip
plop plop
drip
oooooohhhhhh
plop drip dripdrip drip
plop
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
drip drip burp plop plop pluck
bucket
beneath
bucket
beneath
drip drip
free at last
free at last......................
Up the ladder:
Hurt
Down the ladder:
temple
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Posted: October 24, 2003 6:35 PM PDT; Last modified: October 24, 2003 6:35 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.3276463 Overall Rank: 13104 Comments:
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god'swife @ 67.73.32.247
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24-Oct-03/6:39 PM
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A post- post- post- Modern Luther King Jr.
Behave yourself, Senor Burro!!!!!!!
Sounds like a table full of chubby cheeked Hawaiians jonesing for diet poi.
My thoughts are more like drop and splash.
I cracked up when i saw it because for a moment i thought it would be your life story.
Ever had a stricture? Annoying they are. The cure is quite embarrasing. It gives you first hand experience of a menstrual cycle. minus the cramps.
A masterpiece of poo poetry.
let it drip. 10.
Personally I think toilet poems are a valid art form.
http://www.poemranker.com/poem-details.j
Why don't you fuck off, with your generic, nasal European accent, and your tedious intrigued facial expression. You make sure to ask a question in every lecture in your thin whining voice, and smile. You make sure to nod whenever the professor says something you agree with. IT'S A FUCKING MATHEMATICS LECTURE. STOP NODDING YOUR HEAD YOU FUCKER.
Excuse me Professor (Stephen Hawking) I think your computerised mouthbox is jammed stuck on arse.
More psychology lectures actually.
If I can electo-cute monkeys then I can electo-cute (learned cripple) numpties.
You posted this on my 30th birthday and very fitting it seems.
Looking back on my earlier stuff I agree it sucked ass.
The occasional line / stanza was okay but I cringe looking back at some of it. My error was to post stuff in no apparent order, for instance I would post a poem i wrote at 20 and then the same day one I just wrote at 27 and its no wonder you thought 'what the fuck'? I realized this error and birthed the swine - now I hope some of my later ones (the last 30 or so) are passable. I was an arrogant cunt and apologize. 306 view(s)
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