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Betrayed (Free verse) by elizabethann
So I guess today's the day my heart has to break I've run out of things to say and I'm so tired of being awake. I think I could have loved you until you left me devastated now I'm crying and I don't know what to do, maybe this was wrong, maybe I should have waited. I wish there was a simple way to mend this hole in my heart but no matter how many apologies you say, I think I'll always be torn apart. So if I mean that much to you here's what you should do; Give me time. Give me time to heal Because right now, I don't even want to feel.

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.5
Weighted score: 4.3276463
Overall Rank: 13101
Posted: June 28, 2004 2:45 PM PDT; Last modified: June 28, 2004 2:45 PM PDT
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