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Betrayed (Free verse) by elizabethann
So I guess today's the day
my heart has to break
I've run out of things to say
and I'm so tired of being awake.
I think I could have loved you
until you left me devastated
now I'm crying and I don't know what to do,
maybe this was wrong, maybe I should have waited.
I wish there was a simple way
to mend this hole in my heart
but no matter how many apologies you say,
I think I'll always be torn apart.
So if I mean that much to you
here's what you should do;
Give me time.
Give me time to heal
Because right now, I don't even want to feel.
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Arithmetic Mean: 2.5
Weighted score: 4.3276463
Overall Rank: 13106
Posted: June 28, 2004 2:45 PM PDT; Last modified: June 28, 2004 2:45 PM PDT
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