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My deepest thoughts (Free verse) by poetandknowit

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Caducus 18-Oct-05/5:57 AM
Looking back on my earlier stuff I agree it sucked ass.

The occasional line / stanza was okay but I cringe looking back at some of it.

My error was to post stuff in no apparent order, for instance I would post a poem i wrote at 20 and then the same day one I just wrote at 27 and its no wonder you thought 'what the fuck'?

I realized this error and birthed the swine - now I hope some of my later ones (the last 30 or so) are passable.

I was an arrogant cunt and apologize.




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