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Billy and the voices (Free verse) by SupremeDreamer
I'm pretty unemotional today
though hellish dreams coat the mental scenery.
Its a passing phase-
or so they say.
The voices, they like sharp objects
and enjoy when I play with them.
Scarred fingers seem pretty,
its a matter of taste-
or so they say.
Its annoying, this apathy
when the rage boils in the background.
No one can hear the sound of hate
or so they say.
I lost the bet;
the voices said that my girlfriend
would bleed like a running faucet.
Needless to say, I didn't believe them
but there she is, staining the carpet
Mom won't be happy.
Its a passing phase-
or so they say.
I'm not convinced.
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Arithmetic Mean: 7.428571
Weighted score: 5.6531434
Overall Rank: 2096
Posted: October 12, 2003 4:46 PM PDT; Last modified: October 12, 2003 4:46 PM PDT
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i think you totally lost your marbles miss...
its like that scene in The Patriot where the battleship explodes and the court lady claps, laughing, saying she enjoys the fireworks.