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Billy and the voices (Free verse) by SupremeDreamer

I'm pretty unemotional today though hellish dreams coat the mental scenery. Its a passing phase- or so they say. The voices, they like sharp objects and enjoy when I play with them. Scarred fingers seem pretty, its a matter of taste- or so they say. Its annoying, this apathy when the rage boils in the background. No one can hear the sound of hate or so they say. I lost the bet; the voices said that my girlfriend would bleed like a running faucet. Needless to say, I didn't believe them but there she is, staining the carpet Mom won't be happy. Its a passing phase- or so they say. I'm not convinced.

SupremeDreamer 12-Oct-03/6:45 PM
courage the cowardly dog?...

i think you totally lost your marbles miss...

its like that scene in The Patriot where the battleship explodes and the court lady claps, laughing, saying she enjoys the fireworks.





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