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Why? (Free verse) by MercedezDream
Why do you agravate me? Why do won't you let me be? Why are you such a bitch? Why is it when I see you I get an itch? Why do you stare at me like that? Why do always try to jump on my back? Why O why don't you just leave me alone? Why do you scream when you call me on the phone? Why do you haunt me even though you are dead? Why didn't you just do what I said?

Up the ladder: Buzzards
Down the ladder: Slaves and their Serpents

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.6
Weighted score: 5.0715218
Overall Rank: 6567
Posted: October 13, 2003 5:46 AM PDT; Last modified: October 13, 2003 5:46 AM PDT
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[8] Shuushin @ 147.154.235.51 | 13-Oct-03/6:28 AM | Reply
heh - cute. I was just about to give up, cuz the endrhymes are, well - like they are.

Then you have this awesome ending; good job.
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.212.215 | 13-Oct-03/9:49 AM | Reply
MEDIOCRITY CODE: B16040F1
[n/a] Wobble McFly @ 195.157.153.253 > -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. | 13-Oct-03/10:08 AM | Reply

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[n/a] <~> @ 167.206.181.179 > Wobble McFly | 13-Oct-03/12:09 PM | Reply
same to you!
[3] kingit @ 67.69.61.91 | 13-Oct-03/4:07 PM | Reply
why-o-why?- because, damnit!
[n/a] richa @ 81.86.73.77 | 14-Oct-03/7:44 AM | Reply
Out of all the rhymes to steal you take bitch and itch from some pink song?
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