Re: TeEn PoEtRy ShOlD dIe by teenpoetryshoulddie	26-Jun-03/1:51 PM
Are you Poet and know it? this has his distinctive hall mark of castigating put downs. I found English teachers about as accessible as wading through glue, yet it made one laugh a little so 6 tank tops for you.
Re: Mistaken Battlefields by Brian Tiensvold	26-Jun-03/1:44 PM
Formulaic, yet I applaud the end it was impounding. 6
Re: a comment on The Park Bench by Mr Pig	25-Jun-03/3:00 PM
Thank you, I didn't want to saturate this too much in imagery as the subject matter was not quite so emotional as in 'The Blooding' or 'The Order Of Things', I wanted to merely convey a sense of memory to something that was sweet in my life, ultimately something that moulded who I was as a lover, rather than a victim. Thank you for reading it.
Re: Z higher of arts by ==Doylum	21-Jun-03/9:50 AM
Jolly hockeysticks this raised my furred brow and by columbus I liked it. 6
Re: a comment on Thracian mountains until the Sea by Shardik	7-Jun-03/8:36 AM
Dear Horus here is that website. http://www.grecian.net/GREECE/thrace/thrace.htm. I also advise downloading comet cursor and use foreword Thracian mountains. Comet Cursor is a comprehensively useful tool.
Re: a comment on A Moment In Nowhere by Mr Pig	5-Jun-03/11:58 AM
Dear Horus, I did notice line 3 was a tad poor so I have changed it. I hope to tighten it in due course. Thanks all for reading it.
Re: Beggar's Indulgence by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	3-Jun-03/9:26 AM
Amusing 10. This should help your 7.61 vote my dear muse.
Re: Spit wad by Shardik	29-May-03/8:28 AM
I so believe I may know who this is about but cockfighting was never my strong point. I did however find this profusely amusing and this is a really effective put down. One was amused ! Heres 10 farthings to spend on the phone call to the sinister man in the pin stripe suit. Very Chicago.
Re: The last of the sworn heels by Bachus	28-May-03/8:29 AM
The last stanza and 3/4 I found compelling and rich in verse. Good work my boy ! 8
Re: Cliche by Blue Magpie	28-May-03/8:25 AM
I have a soft spot for this, well done.
Re: beat myself with a stick by sir_heff	28-May-03/8:23 AM
Alas so true my tortured soul.
Re: Sex with a hairy brazilian by scitz	28-May-03/8:20 AM
How vulgar, you lout !
Re: The Bloody War Of Angels by Caducus	28-May-03/8:13 AM
Oh my
Re: a comment on The Order Of Things by Mr Pig	21-May-03/3:27 PM
I totally agree. I have just watched the most poignant film about sacrifice (war to end all wars) we should embrace our freedom so many died under extreme suffering to give to us. We have become tragicaly materialist and I appreciate your comment. There is so much more depth to you than I envisaged. Peace be with you.
Re: a comment on The Order Of Things by Mr Pig	20-May-03/3:35 PM
Thank you, how embarressing on my part. Did you like it Shardik?
Re: spring by <~>	20-May-03/1:12 PM
Your the Queen of this form, I bow for your tap of the sword.
Re: Activating your Infinity by horus8	20-May-03/12:59 PM
Sounds like a scene from the Bible, Sweet Endymion ! A fine read Mr H I enjoyed the motion of the narrative. I have never travelled to HNL before, my skin blisters in the heat and I felt quite ill. Maybe one day I'll come and, no you wouldn;t be seen dead with me, forgive me my beautiful Horus. Take an 8 and hears to you my man - Cheers !
Re: Love Squirts by wFraser Allonby Q.C.w	20-May-03/12:53 PM
You naughty boy.
Re: Burst! by INTRANSIT	20-May-03/12:47 PM
Bloody marvellous but the term Tsunami is over baking the Spotted Dick im my humble opinion. As ever though your work is an asset to this site. May I offer you an 8 I/T, would that be okay?
Re: a comment on Be Not Afraid Of Dying. by Mr Pig	12-May-03/5:09 AM
Thank you for pointing that out I had one too many brandys last night but have corrected to thr 5-7-5 format. God Bless you Sir