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Be Not Afraid Of Dying. (Haiku) by Mr Pig
Death is the eighth day, It has no end, no sunsets, mortals live their dreams.
Down the ladder: RipTide
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.714286
Weighted score: 6.2532434
Overall Rank: 920
Posted: May 11, 2003 3:27 PM PDT; Last modified: May 12, 2003 5:08 AM PDT
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[7] Shardik @ 24.126.113.154 | 11-May-03/5:23 PM | Reply
You are awesome at freeform, but your haikus are consistently off. this one's 5 7 6.
[n/a] Mr Pig @ 62.105.88.10 > Shardik | 12-May-03/5:09 AM | Reply
Thank you for pointing that out I had one too many brandys last night but have corrected to thr 5-7-5 format.

God Bless you Sir
[8] Caducus @ 62.105.88.10 | 12-May-03/8:09 AM | Reply
not your best but still good and a message of hope that i liked 8
[8] richa @ 195.92.168.171 | 12-May-03/10:21 AM | Reply
yes I like the tone of the haiku, seems to work with the sentiment.
Also its reasoning is very succinct
[10] INTRANSIT @ 152.163.252.72 | 18-May-03/8:55 AM | Reply
Works for me.
[9] Ranger @ 86.140.66.105 | 13-Sep-06/10:15 PM | Reply
Sweet, traditional English meets traditional Japanese. Blessed.
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