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RipTide

Member since 2003 · Posted 28 Nov 2003 · 1 comment

I want to be alone today In a place where worries are gone So I think Im going to let the riptide carry me away I will drift through the ocean Leaving pain and agony behind For I am getting to know my mind So let the rip tide carry me away Ill worry and cry another day Leave fear and horror for tomorrow I just want to get away from sadness and sorrow No worrys anymore Ill worry when I get back to shore I will forget all my regrets Because Im being carried away by the sea And for now I am carefree

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[10] ShelliAnne 28-Nov-03/12:01 PM Reply
i have those feeling too ... i can communcate w/ that