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Be Not Afraid Of Dying. (Haiku) by Mr Pig

Death is the eighth day, It has no end, no sunsets, mortals live their dreams.

Shardik 11-May-03/5:23 PM
You are awesome at freeform, but your haikus are consistently off. this one's 5 7 6.




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