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Free verse № 39687

The last of the sworn heels

Member since 2002 · Posted 8 Feb 2003 · Edited 27 May 2003 · 7 comments

While listening to pre-beat Jazz. Damn, the rain still will not fall as-- we never said "should it?" to their blue sky. In the land of one season. There is hardly a reason. You can keep what you think must be my pie. Because, the pies are for their parades. Where their petals shall surely cascade. To dry up, just as when they were first ridden. Can't you tell that March from this June? As you hand fill all of your "to soons". For children that will never be taller for thinking. But it is not in their height. Or what we claim "out of sight". Because, there's nothing left, but to raise sheep-- while conforming. I know that you'll build the best bud float. Like your hand-crafted Lebonese sail-boat. Though before you, there was no one that found-- the Grail's edge. So as I claim this world that God damn flat. And I, your sure footed front door mat. Did you know that next door there's an old man growing sore, that'll fix your shoe's sole-- but not the tongue for a nickel?

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[7] TanHand 8-Feb-03/8:31 AM Reply
all about i
[7] TanHand 8-Feb-03/9:43 AM Reply
MY NAME IS PEPITO SUAREZ AND AND AND....angie....angie
[7] TanHand 8-Feb-03/9:44 AM Reply
ANGIE....ANGIEEEEE.....AIN'T IT GOOD TO BE ALIVE...ANGIE...ANNNGIE....YOU CAN'T SAY WE NEVER, TRIE-IE-IE-IED HA HA HA HA HA HA JUST CAN'T GET ENUF
[7] TanHand 8-Feb-03/9:44 AM Reply
EVERYTHING THEY TOLD ME ABOUT THE RENNAISANCE WAS A LIE!!! I HAVE BEEN WASTING MY VERY LIFE!!!!!!!!!!!!! A MAN IS NOT A PIECE OF FRUIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
[10] INTRANSIT 28-May-03/4:59 AM Reply
I must give you back your golden Q-Tip award for this.
The awards I ordered didn't make it through the firefight.
[n/a] horus8 › INTRANSIT 28-May-03/8:39 AM Reply
lol.
[8] Mr Pig 28-May-03/8:29 AM Reply
The last stanza and 3/4 I found compelling and rich in verse. Good work my boy ! 8