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beat myself with a stick (Free verse) by sir_heff I'll never be what I want to be
'cause all I want to be, is something other than me
and what you'll never see is the real me
'cause I keep him in a cage and beat him every day at 3:00
I beat him with a stick, then I call him a prick
I break off his dick, then I beat him with it.
I say heâs a joke, as he chokes on a rope.
Then my stick broke, so I proceeded to poke
him in the rib, then I do it again
I beat him until, the rhymes he will spill
Time for this one to end, but Iâll be back again....
Up the ladder:
Plucking hearts and banjo
Down the ladder:
Truth in Lies
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Posted: January 17, 2003 7:55 AM PST; Last modified: May 28, 2003 7:32 AM PDTWeighted score: 5.614723 Overall Rank: 2230 Comments:
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17-Jan-03/10:55 AM
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Do you now?
Haha......here's a 9 for making me laugh
thats what i wrote it for :)
Hey dude, can't say i like most of your stuff but this one appeals to me. I feel i could elaborate for hours around the second section. A few grammar and spelling corrections and i would love it.
Funny but, it seems to ryhme too much(if thats possible) -7-
Alas so true my tortured soul.
Heek:{
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