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Truth in Lies (Free verse) by BleedingRose
What holds more truth?
A truth or a lie?
For truth can be used
To defeat a man's mind.
Truth, it is fact,
It is certain and strict.
It is open to all
To use as they wish.
An imposing truth,
As irrelavant as air,
Can defeat a man's purpose
With belief without care.
Lies can enlighten
If you know where to look.
They can bare a man's heart
Like a well written book.
Though lies lead astray,
And oppose your belief,
There is more to be seen
In what they want you to think.
The source of man's need,
The reasons he cries,
His expressions of love,
He must weave them in lies.
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Posted: April 22, 2003 9:39 AM PDT; Last modified: April 22, 2003 9:39 AM PDT
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anyway, its damn good, i have had that idea on the tip of my brain for a wile now, just havent found the words.....