poemranker ::Beggar's Indulgence by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.

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Haiku № 40591

Beggar's Indulgence

by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.

Member since 2002 · Posted 17 Feb 2003 · 11 comments

Asleep on the bench - Once proud beard, now laced with chives. Has he been feasting?

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11 comments

[n/a] horus8 17-Feb-03/11:14 AM Reply
You can thank me for the ten in person, with chives.
[10] Bill Z Bub 17-Feb-03/11:41 AM Reply
brrrrrrrrill.
[9] Ranger 17-Feb-03/12:19 PM Reply
Perfect, again.
[10] razorgrin 18-Feb-03/10:42 AM Reply
Groovin'. Chive-tastic. All I get is the drunk/junkie homeless doing their thing in the graveyard across the street from my place. Maybe I should offer chives?
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. › razorgrin 26-May-03/2:16 PM Reply
Chives are the very lifeblood of the tramp! To offer chives to a tramp is the utmost folly... Would you offer fuel to a fire? Yes, yes, I suppose you would. Then go, go into the chives lounge with my blessings, and return with an armful of aromatic deformity, and spread it on all who will be spread 'pon.
[9] Robert K Foster 21-May-03/11:15 AM Reply
nice.
[8] Felzpoet 29-May-03/8:52 PM Reply
ma nu sure do like writtin bout dissease of the world dont u
[n/a] Mr Pig 3-Jun-03/9:26 AM Reply
Amusing 10.

This should help your 7.61 vote my dear muse.
[9] daniella 4-Jun-03/10:11 PM Reply
go figure
[8] Kitch 12-Jun-03/1:45 AM Reply
Where did you see my Father we miss him terribly?

DA, this is hilarious but out of respect I never laughed. 8
[7] eliastemplar 4-Aug-03/10:26 AM Reply
This haiku made me hungry. Jelouse of the satisfied man on the beach.