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20 most recent comments by Shardik (521-540) and replies

Re: The wheelchair by INTRANSIT 17-Feb-03/2:57 PM
It was the phantom of a false slip aND FALL ACCIDENT CLAIM. a thief in the night. a door prop.
Re: THE WHEELCHAIR by Garrett S Sexton 17-Feb-03/2:55 PM
Garret, your irascibility is not a good side effect to dwell within when one is traversing the often booby trapped road to recovery and normality.
Re: Death Of Day ( re-edit) by Mr Pig 16-Feb-03/11:52 AM
Decent, but why do i keep counting eighteen? You know when i was younger i lived on the island of Kauai. I saw a pig roast. Many beautiful sunsets. I watched them kill the pig. I have never heard a sound come out of any living thing even similiar. Have you heard that sound? I'll wait to vote for your assesment of the structure.
Re: Sharks For Libido by scitz 16-Feb-03/11:47 AM
Good show.
Re: 75%! by Crakyamuni 14-Feb-03/4:08 PM
666%
Re: a comment on Cupid promised me, Nadine by Shardik 14-Feb-03/4:06 PM
how about now.
Re: a comment on An Ode to minorties that use Paprika by Shardik 9-Feb-03/5:44 PM
I'm part hungarian Gypsy, but this poem is about Osmosis fool. Not Hungarians, That, and being hungry. Hungry? I'm cooking soup for my son and myself currently. Care for a bowl?
Re: Truth by strider1 9-Feb-03/1:38 PM
The Lorde of Chirpe is still loyal, and i , his fathfull scabbard... will hold thee... cupped.
Re: Pain by Teen14 9-Feb-03/1:34 PM
i believe that this poem would work miracles, if you sustituted "soap" for "stop".
Re: Ghost Girl by wordontheverge 9-Feb-03/9:00 AM
A good sermon.
Re: Past by Dostoyevsky 6-Feb-03/6:09 PM
I liked this. I gave you the blue nine a couple of hours ago. cheers.
Re: 6:02 by corinacorrie 6-Feb-03/6:06 PM
A bit chirped... i feel and rushed.
Re: breathe on me? by emilyowey 6-Feb-03/6:04 PM
Grrrrrrr.
Re: immaculate perception by w~* ATHENA *~w 5-Feb-03/12:24 PM
Beef and broccoli with oyster sauce. choice!
Re: A Short Letter by Ranger 4-Feb-03/1:28 PM
Wasn't Byron lame and portly? Don't get me started on Chaucer.
Re: NASA Fireworks by TheDevil 2-Feb-03/3:43 PM
I was hoping for something a bit more intelligent, but then againn this is poemranker not Yale. Stipend anyone?
Re: Kaolin Fire is SHIT by poemwanker 1-Feb-03/3:08 PM
Roach motel.
Re: a comment on Jesus rides the comet by Shardik 1-Feb-03/2:51 PM
Correct. I play that song (all of my songs and other's too) quite a few different ways uplugged, plugged, piano sometimes. What ever the moment calls for. i call it environmental adjustings in progress always. Your feedback is very much appreciated, thank you.
Re: Because The Ground Is Still Frozen by razorgrin 31-Jan-03/3:00 PM
Fuck. I'm stumped...ahh does the hamster represent 'a furry eclectic olive' or the hibernating tread wheel activitie's of our soles. I'm fully aware that the ice tray represents our unity through division, but WHY! WHY SWEET JESUS cAN'T WE INVENT A FREEZER with a hamster escape hatch... i mean for the love of rodent's and plague and funny looking men with tits can't we find it in our soles to just listen to what our hamster friends are trying to say to us... "don't let friends ice skate without gloves and a hat"...it's really that simple.
Re: I Am a Snob, or, 'A Definition' by JakeBike 31-Jan-03/2:50 PM
Now this is an 'other' . Thank god when we put on our end of the month donkey shows at your garage they are anything but common profanity. Hear that 'club stridex'? We are uncommonly profane. New and improved astringent for your blackheads, and as soon as the swelling goes down on my knees i'm going to prove it... has anyone seen my mineral oil?


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