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~* ATHENA *~ is a recipient of the poemWanker award: immaculate perception (Free verse) by w~* ATHENA *~wfor appropriating other writers' work and otherwise plagiarising. Read with caution! mother of the white gloves
who shoves
me into a dress
I don't like
just another catholic girl
who had no immaculate
conception
of what is real
or for that matter
what it is to feel.
altar boys
used as toys
so much noise
when they
realize it is dad
who is the bad.
one.
Up the ladder:
planet
Down the ladder:
Disappear
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Posted: February 4, 2003 9:32 PM PST; Last modified: February 4, 2003 9:32 PM PSTWeighted score: 3.8190591 Overall Rank: 13486 Comments:
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Shardik @ 24.126.113.154
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5-Feb-03/12:24 PM
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Beef and broccoli with oyster sauce. choice!
Do you listen to Black Sabbath, Athena?
"In the daylight/runs darkness/on the verge of night a fear is born/sweeter than the dream" etc. Good song
Powerful spacing.
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