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Free verse № 39317

immaculate perception

by w~* ATHENA *~w

Member since 2002 · Posted 4 Feb 2003 · 3 comments

mother of the white gloves who shoves me into a dress I don't like just another catholic girl who had no immaculate conception of what is real or for that matter what it is to feel. altar boys used as toys so much noise when they realize it is dad who is the bad. one.

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[9] Shardik 5-Feb-03/12:24 PM Reply

Beef and broccoli with oyster sauce. choice!

[n/a] Ranger 5-Feb-03/12:40 PM Reply

Do you listen to Black Sabbath, Athena?

"In the daylight/runs darkness/on the verge of night a fear is born/sweeter than the dream" etc. Good song

[10] Stephen Robins 7-May-04/8:45 AM Reply

Powerful spacing.